View Full Version : Wonder Woman script for critique
08-29-2003, 05:24 PM
First time visitor, first time poster. I've been developing scripts for comics for the past few years and am just starting to really pursue paying projects.
I recently worked up some Wonder Woman scripts as examples of working with existing characters, and I would really appreciate some feedback.
This script, "The Test", is a downloadable PDF:
Let me know what you think!
08-29-2003, 11:47 PM
WELCOME to thewriters desk and PJ!!!!! :D
i will take a gander at ur script later today, got a hectic afternoon ahead :D tonight prob!
08-29-2003, 11:55 PM
Thanks! I really appreciate the time.
Right now I'm making the rounds looking for projects to offer some constructive criticism to... don't want to come of as a "critique leech", after all.
08-30-2003, 12:03 AM
it's no worries :D
C&c away or post up and await c&cs It's all part of the fun here!!!
or join in our story round too!
It's good to have new folks on board!
08-30-2003, 12:43 AM
I started to read the story round, but when I read fantasy/sci-fi work that hits hard and fast with dozens of character and place names, my eyes glaze over really quick. I'm definitely a slice-of-lifer, though I appreciate good fantasy that's rooted firmly in familiar situations and emotions.
But perseverence furthers: I copied the text of the first three parts, and the opening description, to a separate document and will digest it and tackle the fourth part.
Into the breach!
08-30-2003, 10:23 PM
I managed to get some time to take a peek at your initial script.
Very nice!! I really like it! it has some pyschological feel to it.
more, more, show us more! :D
looking fwd to seeing your #4 in the story round!!!! if you have a suggestion for another story round using "real-life" style, then sure, go ahead and suggest it to Vendetta. It will be fun to have more "exercises" here.
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