Killer at the Bar - 7 pages

[CWmax]

Here is a seven page story I drew from a script....

It seems this Assassin is looking for Cedric the Dragonslayer...

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[Summerhavok]

WOah! These are some crazy backgrounds man! Very nice story telling on the panels guy, sweet facial expressions. My only problem would be some of the images seem faded, or too lightly penciled. That is probably the scanners fault and not yours, but maybe getting the pages inked might help. Really cool story, is this just some generic script you chose or did you work with an actual writer? I hope to see more of your work in the future CW, take care!

[Sam Spade]

CW,
These are some really nice pages. Your background detail is incredible.
Due to the other than regular comic size, can I assume this is for Strip Search II over at DH? If so, I think you have a very good chance of getting in over there.

[version2]

Wow. The details are amazing.

[BrianDittfeld]

Your background details are amazing! Great stuff.

The only flaws I see at a quick glance and at the size they are at are the anatomy on a lot of the characters. In many of the panels, either the heads are a bit bigger than they should be, legs too small to the body, etc.

Overall, not bad. Just continue to work on your anatomy and you'll not just become a good penciler, but a kick-ass penciler.