MightyMatt
08-21-2003, 11:49 PM
Alright I really need some input on the outline my writer has set up...
Basically I just need what you like and what could be improved upon.
I am not a certified writer, so this is my writer's stuff although I am quite involved in plot ideas as well. But without further ado here it is...
Here is the latest on my DH proposal as per my writer:
Here are a couple of ideas I've been throwing around
in regards to Blood Bullets.
The story is a western set on a frontier world in the
far future. THe Human colonists are led by the Haas
family, whose youngest daughter has been kidnapped.
Sari Halpern is a 30ish Indiana Jones-type and the
heroine of our story. She is an orphan who was raised
by a thief, but works for an intergalactic museum.
She's visiting this world in search of an artifact
called Oyola Gusta, the Good Eye. She and her robot
companion, BillyFish, are roped into helping the
Haas'.
The vampiric non-human colonists from the other side
of the planet are really superman-type aliens who have
these powers because of the nature of the planet.
Their genetic material is sympathetic to the sentient
planet, who the kidnapped girl can speak with. Turns
out Sari is sensitive to the girl, psychically, and
that's how they can find her. Unfortunately, the girl
is being used by the non-humans to create fear in the
other kidnapped humans so that the non-humans can
feast on the adrenaline created in their brains, which
is a drug for them.
This is just a barebones outline, but all input would be nice and make me feel warm and fuzzy inside.
Thanks
matt
Basically I just need what you like and what could be improved upon.
I am not a certified writer, so this is my writer's stuff although I am quite involved in plot ideas as well. But without further ado here it is...
Here is the latest on my DH proposal as per my writer:
Here are a couple of ideas I've been throwing around
in regards to Blood Bullets.
The story is a western set on a frontier world in the
far future. THe Human colonists are led by the Haas
family, whose youngest daughter has been kidnapped.
Sari Halpern is a 30ish Indiana Jones-type and the
heroine of our story. She is an orphan who was raised
by a thief, but works for an intergalactic museum.
She's visiting this world in search of an artifact
called Oyola Gusta, the Good Eye. She and her robot
companion, BillyFish, are roped into helping the
Haas'.
The vampiric non-human colonists from the other side
of the planet are really superman-type aliens who have
these powers because of the nature of the planet.
Their genetic material is sympathetic to the sentient
planet, who the kidnapped girl can speak with. Turns
out Sari is sensitive to the girl, psychically, and
that's how they can find her. Unfortunately, the girl
is being used by the non-humans to create fear in the
other kidnapped humans so that the non-humans can
feast on the adrenaline created in their brains, which
is a drug for them.
This is just a barebones outline, but all input would be nice and make me feel warm and fuzzy inside.
Thanks
matt