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08-21-2003, 11:00 AM
08-21-2003, 11:02 AM
This is not finished, but I wont post the final till I get my damned 11x17 scanner so here is page 1 so far, I need to tighten some things up with the daughter/mother and make the children more visible in the 3rd panel.
08-21-2003, 11:11 AM
very nice! i like the expression on the dads face
08-21-2003, 11:53 AM
i agree. great expression great sequence. its almost shot like a movie. i love how it flows.
keep it up!
i want to pet the evil furry monsters tho. they look so cute a soft.
i think the only thing that might make the flow better is if yo put teh mother daughter picture before the daughter picture. of course i dont knwo the story, but its makes it more like you are sliding towards the bear/daughter. or put the mother in the daughter panel as wll because you should be able to see her right?
08-21-2003, 04:24 PM
that is amazingly cool, you can really feel their fear:eek:
08-22-2003, 09:55 AM
thanks- thast true about the girl but the way the script is its better fer her to be alone first then the mom slide in
Awesome B. Rockinsocks
08-22-2003, 01:55 PM
wow, very impressive, my only crit is with the first panel. I'm just confused as to what the wolves (were-wolves?) are looking at. I'm guessing a window since there are people inside with a window behind them on the third panel. Maybe some more defination with the lines in the window.
08-22-2003, 04:01 PM
I agree I fixed the window scene
08-23-2003, 05:48 PM
good stuff as ussual grendal
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