new sequential stuff....part 1

[kyle12779]

I lurk because I love.

After a loooooong absence, I'm back with more Jazz Devil pages!
So I posted a bunch of new pages on my website--lowkeycomics.com (plug plug) and thought I'd get a few critiques page by page, so here's 12 & 13.

http://lowkeycomics.com/issue02page1213.JPG

[kyle12779]

Here's 14 and 15...I'll post more tomorrow so I don't flood the board.

http://lowkeycomics.com/issue02page1415.JPG

[ComicsInk]

now thats a good read. part one and two i want more. love the kiss scene where it blurs thats a great panel. got skills man!

[MightyMatt]

I read both the posts...you got a bit of surreal in your comic work...it looks really beautiful but I'm not into the points where you blur out the character in the foreground...kinda takes away from the page, since everything else is without the blur. I guess what I am saying is that it just doesn't fit to me.

matt

[kyle12779]

And if anybody's interested in reading issue one, as well as some other swell comix, check out my site...
http://www.lowkeycomics.com/ (http://www.lowkeycomics.com)

http://lowkeycomics.com/issue02page1617.JPG

[kyle12779]

http://lowkeycomics.com/issue02page1819.JPG

[kyle12779]

http://lowkeycomics.com/issue02page2021.JPG

[kyle12779]

http://lowkeycomics.com/issue02page2223.JPG

[penciljack]

Multiple threads merged, and huuuuge images changed to links. Please, have mercy on those without broadband.

[MightyMatt]

wow totally brutal, but yet poetic(?) it just comes off as this beautiful story in the mind of a killer. Brilliant concept....beautiful pages...love the rendering and the attention to detail. You have some very gorgeous pages on here kyle.
Very brutal, but very delightful to see.

matt

[kyle12779]

Thanks for the kind words, guys. More people need to say stuff! And visit my site--LOW KEY COMICS (http://www.lowkeycomics.com)

[atom_basher]

great storytelling, at first i was reading it thinking it was a romantic comedy, and was nto it then but as it got darker i started loving it, too bad it was only a few pages

[jamiller98]

These are really fantastic. The dream-like quality combined with the really brutal sequences are really disturbing (in a good way). The only mis-step (in my opinion) is where you switch the camera upside down (I would pull up the page number, but I am one of the lowly dial-up users Penciljack spoke of . . . typed of . . . whatever). I can see the effect you were going for and I think it was worth trying, but it's a tad too jarring. If you switch those panels so that it stays within the "he's on top" scenario you've already established it will work a lot better. When I have some time I'd love to go through anything else you have on your site. If I wasn't currently connected at 24.00 bps I would do it right now. ;)

[kyle12779]

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[Ra Havok]

I really am a big fan of yours, Kyle.
Skillful art and sharp text.

I too think the blur doesn't work.