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Vendetta
08-16-2003, 12:03 AM
little plastic car

He never aged in my eyes.
He was always the same.
I didn’t believe the photograph
Of Grandpa, in his youth,
With his hair combed slick,
And no color in the film.

That Photograph,
In the silvery frame,
On the old oak dresser,
In the back of his bedroom,
Which smelled strongly of cedar,
Was surrounded by coins,
Colognes and handkerchiefs,
Dust covered and sun-bleached.

A little plastic car
Sat in a treasured place.
I gave him that little trinket
Long before the days that I can remember,
Telling him to keep it
And always remember me
Whenever he saw it.

And he did keep it,
Like a wedding ring.
But now, it is my turn
To keep the little plastic car
And always remember him
Whenever I see it.

banshee
08-17-2003, 08:58 PM
very heart-rending. It may be a small car to ppl but it sure does touch ya in the old blood-pumping vessel!

niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice one!!!

more, more!!

lia etc

cabralsoth
08-20-2003, 03:03 PM
as kaligula says....."dammmmmn hommie"

Vendetta
08-21-2003, 01:21 AM
I'm not sure what "dammmmmn hommie" means but I'll assume its mostly good