View Full Version : Reyven Hunt 4-Page Preview
08-15-2003, 12:14 PM
Well, here is part of what I submited to Image 3 weeks ago. Now all the guys who have been supporting Reyven Hunt and myself can actualy get a read.
Thanks for the support, everyone!!
08-15-2003, 12:15 PM
08-15-2003, 12:24 PM
WoooOOOoooOOo! Thanks for the preview, Ray!
Wow, this looks tight-- in a couple of places it's hard to make out the lettering, but on the printed page it'll be bigger, and thus, easier to read.
As for a crit, the storytelling is very well done, as far as I see. The inking on page three is a little muddy in a few spots, but overall a good piece! My only concern is that all the negative space and blacks could possibly make it hard to make out what's going on in each panel-- but I only see that maybe once in these four pages.
Great job, keep it up!
08-15-2003, 12:25 PM
well I speak for the people when i say that you deseerve the support
08-15-2003, 12:29 PM
Jeremy, the extra black on the sides were placed there by the letterer. It will be cut down whenever it gets printed for sure:)
08-15-2003, 02:31 PM
This is absolutely beautiful!
If Image decides to publish this, I'm gonna bug the Dutch translator guys to print it here!
08-15-2003, 07:18 PM
kudos hommie,this looks amazing good luck
08-15-2003, 09:52 PM
I remember seeing that last page before when you posted it here and I remember thinking your art rocks.
Still think that. :)
I really like the artwork and your storytelling's pretty strong. My only real gripes are with the second page. Some of the shots aren't too clear and I had to look a while before I could figure out what was going on. Pulling back a bit to show more of the surroundings would have helped some. Pg2Pn1 is the weakest panel out of all 4 pages as I have no idea what's going on there.
The rest of this looks super sweet! Best of luck with Image!
08-16-2003, 02:01 AM
I like the panel layouts.
Page 4 doesn't look like the inks were finished, a lot of it looks like pencils.
08-17-2003, 08:22 PM
that's pretty nice ray...good luck on the book.
08-18-2003, 04:08 AM
HEY SWEET!!! love ur style and it ses Culver City, its where me is at! love it!
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