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08-12-2003, 09:32 PM
this is page three of the Challengers artjam project. C & C wanted. Gracias.
I'm really happy with this in almost all regards. My own comments are under the pic.
08-12-2003, 11:00 PM
you might want to watch how you layout a page for smooth transition and flow. I am constantly jumping around and am not sure which panel is the first one to read, so on and so forth.
I do like the characters and your black and white composition on the page...I can just hope that some lettering can help out the flow of this nice looking page.
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