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artronin9
08-06-2003, 11:26 AM
Hey,
I'm continuing work on my own book 'Pants'. I previously posted the first five pages, and here are the next five. I've included a link to the first five pages in case you missed them. And you can view all the pages as well at my website (http://www.geocities.com/artronin9) .

Pants 1-5 (http://www.geocities.com/artronin9/pants.htm)

page 6
http://www.geocities.com/artronin9/pant6.JPG

page 7
http://www.geocities.com/artronin9/pants7.JPG

page 8
http://www.geocities.com/artronin9/pants8.JPG
artronin9
08-06-2003, 11:27 AM
page 9
http://www.geocities.com/artronin9/pants9.JPG

page 10
http://www.geocities.com/artronin9/pants10.JPG
EddieChingLives
08-06-2003, 12:36 PM
Wow. These are incredible. Consistant art. Your characters look the same from panel to panel. Very impressive.

But there's alot of artwork here. Anything over 3 images, you might want to link the rest of them.

But I'm blown away. Very pro-looking. I'd buy it.
Mykro
08-07-2003, 01:12 PM
Ok, no real crits from me, except you take too long to bring the sis in. Other than that, I'm big on the story, the humor is well done. Kinda Kevin Smith-y. I'd pick it up if the story keeps up. Your style is slick, and you're not doing the fantasy stuff that usually bores me. Rock on brother.
Caimano
08-08-2003, 06:56 AM
OMG you 're the same Astronin9 posted X Force, Hellboy, Avengers, MJ and Spidey pages? Your stle is changed a lot . I miss the first thread where you posted the first 5 pages, but let me say your art is really good on these ones. You started to use black spot area and zip tonesand it makes the difference!
artronin9
08-08-2003, 08:52 AM
Yup, I'm the same guy. I'm trying a slightly different stlye than what I usually go for. Well, this story calls for something a little more cartoony and it gives me a chance to be a little looser. I'm also inking and toning all my own work, which I rarely do. So hopefully it'll help me with my work all around and I'll get some more 'normal' posts up sooner or later, but I'm having a blast working on this book. I'm glad people seem to be enjoying this story so far.
koan
08-09-2003, 12:53 PM
...only thing i'd say is, when the chick left and he was sittin' there with his head on his hands... i expected him to pick up a bottle of baby oil and make his way to the bathroom...

...the monkey at the end though is priceless...
...but i thought the dialogue from the main character was kinda superfluous... we didn't really need to have him say the monkey was wearing a big dumb helmet and a shiny diaper... we're seeing it along with him...

...i think something betraying a more subdued surprise would make for better humor (i assume you're going for humor)... like "hmph... a monkey. that's different." or somethin' silly like that...

...otherwise... i really like the art style and whatnot...
frontjibi
08-09-2003, 11:07 PM
wow astronin9 to be i honest i was never instersted in reading any other comics, they were boring but this one is amazing man. i really, really like it very much. The story is great, perfect! i like very much the way u drew the characters. Keep it up! Ans i would like to see more of ur comics soon.
protagon
08-10-2003, 01:33 AM
I think "Cool! A monkey!" stands fine on it's own but it's your comic and your sense of humor.
Cuddly
08-10-2003, 10:36 AM
artronin9 - this is some seriously sweet stuff. I like the new style. I liked the style you used on the Mary jane sequential too, but I prefer the one you're using here on this story.

The storytelling and panelwork is top notch. Your dialog is really good too. On the last 2 panels of Page 8, the dialog's a bit stiff and awkward, but other than that, it's really impressive. Good work!