some sequents...

[shannyeight]

these are some pages from the gig i'm working on...these pages are from the 1st issue...i'm now currently working on #5...comments and critiques are wanted and welcome...thanx...

http://www.comicsportfolio.com/portfolio/display.asp?ArtworkID=14755
http://www.comicsportfolio.com/portfolio/display.asp?ArtworkID=14756
http://www.comicsportfolio.com/portfolio/display.asp?ArtworkID=14757
http://www.comicsportfolio.com/portfolio/display.asp?ArtworkID=14758
http://www.comicsportfolio.com/portfolio/display.asp?ArtworkID=14759
http://www.comicsportfolio.com/portfolio/display.asp?ArtworkID=14761

[spectremanLIVE!]

Well, uh... That first page wasn't really sequential, was it? Seemed a little more like a pin-up than storytelling. Maybe you should put up some pages with more panels and try to put up a few consecutive pages rather than random pages. It would make critiquing your work a lot easier for those who don't have copies of the book. Right??? RIGHT???:confused:

[shannyeight]

there...reloaded, and added a few more pages, although the continuity of them are spaced apart a bit....