Another Airy Sketch

[[TLG]_Spider-Wal]

okay, i fixed up some blurryness. is it better ?
C&C greatly appreciated.

http://people.zeelandnet.nl/caretaker/Wally/another%20airy%20sketch.jpg

[caanan02]

Your gettin way better man!!! good job!!

[Wishmaster]

yesss, way better, looks like yer putting more time in it, thats good, though that biggest cloud looks very ehm... heavy, don' get me wrong its very well done, but it doesn't fit the weather type, this is more a rainy cloud type :D good job though!

[Tayama]

Yeah, this is cool. I like it.
But ehm, just what Wishmaster said...the biggest cloud looks a bit...weird, and too dark. Maybe the smalles cloud is a bit to dark too.
But besides that, it looks great :)

[Twincruiser]

It's a great sketch....the biggest cloud however doesn't look that natural...it looks stuffed..it should be a bit more loose...more flowing, I guess.

Well done.