Spider-Man Sketch WIP

[BW Fan]

This is a sketch that I'm working on...any comments or suggestions?

Spider-Man (http://www.comicsportfolio.com/portfolio/display.asp?ArtworkID=14348)

Sorry for all of the crud in the scan...I tried to clean it up a little. Thanks for looking!

[kov13]

wow nice job man the perspective is very nice, only thing that bothers me is the angle spidey is falling from it looks like he should be more angled with the statue, but im not sure :confused: but this will look very nice once you finish it keep it up :)

[wannabeGeorge]

Yeah, I don't think there's anything to be swinging from out there. I think he should be leaping off of the statue.

[Mase]

Looks great - especially the hands. Maybe work on his back and spine some - it should curve gradually into his hipbone. Right now it looks unhitched at the waist.

[Geocube]

Good lookin start, although spiderman is almost always ALOT more twisted, he looks a little stiff

[BW Fan]

kov13 - Thanks for your thoughts! I appreciate them. I'm not so sure that I can really change the angle now without a whole lot of rework. I see your point but I'm gonna have to just be lazy this time and leave him pretty much as is. Thanks again though!

wannabeGeorge - What if I showed the web trailing down from the arm or the torch?

Mase - Are you saying more curve inwards toward the butt?

Geocube - Stiff you say? What do you think might loosen him up? Maybe change one of the hands? Twist one of the legs? What do you think?

Thanks to all! :D