Character Creation Sketch

[blaquejag]

I just finished concept character sketch for my concept book, What do ya think C&C is much appreciated:
She is part of a group called the 4 winds of Rilos.

STRATA
http://www.omnioneproductions.com/Statrasketch.jpg

Thanx

[skatermonkey]

It looks great. I just don't like the ribbon thing on her head. Her hands look a little strange, though, but I don't know if it would still look the same after it's finished.

[bitterX]

i like it she looks pretty cool , its very sketchy but i like it that way but somethings are hard to distinguish in the drawing but i spose its only a conspt sketch so it doesnt really matter, i dont like her nose tho its a little bit too big make its slightly smaller and you got one fine looking samauri asian looking kinda girl on your hands. Be cool if you did a neater version o her so every one could see what her clothes looked like. I like the hands they look quite cool but i think maybe er ass looks a little big shes got this thin waste then this big bulging ass with spikes coming out of it :confused: unless thats somthing else??? any way hope any of this helps but what do i know ??

[Senshi]

Cool sketch. I really like the hands and the pose. And she is holding a spiked fan right? Not harboring a giant spikey ass? Lol I can see where she ends and begins, but it was hard at first. I don't like the things in her hair or the rope/braid thing. I can't really tell what it is. The only critique I have is that I think her breasts should be reworked. They are giving me a "heroes in the halfshell" vibe right now. Unless she is wearing some sort of armor.... Anyway overall I'd give it two big thumbs up :)

[Geocube]

I'd love to see it finished

[blaquejag]

Thanks for the props I am still working on this character but it will propably finished and well as the rest of the 4 winds.


skatermonkey: I don't know about losing the hair piece but thanx for the props, and the hands a I have reworked the alot.

bitterX:This is still a prelimary sketch so this will get changed, the character at this point in time does not have a race. but who knows. And I am a ass man but her butt is not that big she is holding a fighting fan in both hands. oh ther will be finished version.


Senshi: Thans and you are that is a bladed fighting fan. lol. reworking the breast , yeah I can do that but what do you mean their to small or to round. she is wearing a leather top as far as I know right not. thanx again.

Geocube : thanx and it will be.

[Senshi]

Originally posted by blaquejag


Senshi: Thans and you are that is a bladed fighting fan. lol. reworking the breast , yeah I can do that but what do you mean their to small or to round. she is wearing a leather top as far as I know right not. thanx again.

Geocube : thanx and it will be.

I think I can explain them.... It's like they are both spehers. But they exist 3/4 of the way inside her chest. It's like they are dented in or something.... I really can't explain it at all. Someone with more artistic prowess should be doing this..ahh.. *tries to focus, um I think maybe her right breast is at a profile angle and her left breast is at a head on angle... or something...Ah nevermind just leave it the way it is... I am the only one who thinks they are off anyway. So pay no attention to me. :) Thumbs up on the pic.

[blaquejag]

I tried to make some slight modifications. so here is the somewhat final product. C&C on these two is welcomed

For give the red pencil it hard has hell to et rid of with out messing with pictures dynamics

Strata.

http://www.omnioneproductions.com/StatrasketchB.jpg

And Introductioning the second wind TORANT
http://www.omnioneproductions.com/torantSketch.jpg

thanks

[Senshi]

Well I will leave you girl alone I think I have caused enough trouble.... It looks good though :) Anyway the guy looks really good but I can't seem to figure out what is going on with his hips. it looks like he has giant hips + a big ass and he is standing with it sticking out. But I can't really see the pic that well so I may be confused.