View Full Version : New here with Eternal Struggle
07-15-2003, 09:09 PM
This comic was done for as a school assignment. I forgot to upload the cover and last 2 pages. Got pretty high mark on this so Iam happy :D
07-23-2003, 07:21 PM
A fun read. But you might want to put more wide shots and shots with backgrounds. Shots so you can tell where they are. Too many close and mid shots with no backgrounds. But good work overall.
07-23-2003, 07:34 PM
Wow, you did this for school? Was it for history or art or something? You've got a cool school...
Excellent work, though! The colors are excellent, and they compliment the art perfectly. It was also very fun to read. Just a quick note, on page 3, the panel setup was kinda confusing, but I like it the way it is. Keep up the awesome work!
07-23-2003, 07:36 PM
MORE! GIVE ME MORE! I WANT TO READ THIS! Who is the main character?
07-23-2003, 11:28 PM
Not so lazy, it seems :) Great work! Like the color job.
07-24-2003, 01:20 AM
I agree with Ed... If I had more wide shots it would have made the story that much better.
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