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thelazyone
07-15-2003, 08:09 PM
This comic was done for as a school assignment. I forgot to upload the cover and last 2 pages. Got pretty high mark on this so Iam happy :D
page1
http://lazydrawings.homestead.com/files/comic-page-1.jpg
page2
http://lazydrawings.homestead.com/files/comic2c.jpg
page3
http://lazydrawings.homestead.com/files/comic-page-3.jpg
EddieChingLives
07-23-2003, 06:21 PM
A fun read. But you might want to put more wide shots and shots with backgrounds. Shots so you can tell where they are. Too many close and mid shots with no backgrounds. But good work overall.
Ian Miller
07-23-2003, 06:34 PM
Wow, you did this for school? Was it for history or art or something? You've got a cool school...

Excellent work, though! The colors are excellent, and they compliment the art perfectly. It was also very fun to read. Just a quick note, on page 3, the panel setup was kinda confusing, but I like it the way it is. Keep up the awesome work!
Darkman117
07-23-2003, 06:36 PM
MORE! GIVE ME MORE! I WANT TO READ THIS! Who is the main character?
:D
Josie70
07-23-2003, 10:28 PM
Not so lazy, it seems :) Great work! Like the color job.

J70
Agent Fire
07-24-2003, 12:20 AM
I agree with Ed... If I had more wide shots it would have made the story that much better.