Girly bum sketch [Archive]

spee de

07-13-2003, 03:25 PM

Inspired from nivbed on the eatpoo forum, i doubt I'll get much feedback from the elite on that forum, i'll get better before i post again.

I prefer this forum anyway, more friendly atmosphere

http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/female/nice_bum.jpg

Thanks

(mild nudity)

Tempus

07-13-2003, 06:03 PM

Nice organic movement...

brendon

07-14-2003, 04:02 AM

I like the way you made the lips on the girl with that puckering kiss look on her face. It really shows the suction going on there :) I'm not trying to be funny though, that's really what I meant...good design..

I like the dynamic, flat line work on the girl which was colored in, however, some might think it's a little strange because it's making things look less life like, and more like an engineering design...I like it though

the three unfinished heads are lopsided and flat...but I guess you didn't finish them, so it doesn't really matter...

Like the squinting girl...shows creativity!

overall looks like some good sketchwork...

s.s.nails

07-14-2003, 06:25 PM

I know what you mean. I was on that forum once and they said I should go here. So i did and im happy. :D
Great stuff. I love your style!
Keep it up, cant wait to see more.

spee de

07-15-2003, 05:59 AM

Thanks for the comments guys

but brendon, I'm not sure waht you mean by 'flat line work', are you talking about the lack of line weights?