I'm new/sketch from the book of Slimm:

[Slimm Jong ILL]

http://www.illslimm.net/slimm.jpg

[Senshi]

Well the line work is very crisp and sharp... But I can't tell what the hell that thing is. Parts of it look awesome, but It's head...(which I still haven't found) need work. I think you have a cool style, but something about your anatomy or composistion needs work cause I can't see what this is. Maybe my eyes are bad I dunno. Nice style when it is understandable.

[Slimm Jong ILL]

and coming from graff, my work is admittedly style over substance sometimes. aside from what you pointed out, a few of the things that bother (for lack of a better word) me about this joint are the thighs and feet, which, even in a style like mine should be proportionate with each other. thanks for commenting, and here's what everything is:

http://www.illslimm.net/slimmexplained.jpg