View Full Version : Wasteland Sequentials
07-09-2003, 09:12 PM
This is a w.i.p. for an Anthology series slated for Sept. I'll set up the scene: Our "hero" has just had a drink tossed at him. Now it's confrontation time.
Crits n'comments appreciated.
07-10-2003, 02:53 PM
pretty cool thus far, but is the skinny guy at the bottom supposed to be sitting on a chair at the bar? cause i dont see it depicted... and the main guys left hand looks funny in that last panel too ....
07-10-2003, 08:33 PM
its pretty good...i don't get a great sense of story from it, not even that he's confronting someone, show me more
07-11-2003, 10:13 AM
Me Likee. especially the bulldog bartender.
I think the main character's left hand in the last panel is too large. Not by much though.
07-15-2003, 03:37 AM
cool lookin' I want to see him kick some arse.
his arms might be too long...
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