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sunburn
06-20-2003, 11:52 PM
did this really quick...
tried to get definite lines instead of half-finished ones, and it came out really good (in my opinion)...
reason why is because this is the style that i've been striving to achieve in terms of guys..
so yeh, maybe ill try and work it so its even better :)

dude-sketch (http://www.deviantart.com/view/2220593)

shavedwookie
06-21-2003, 05:57 AM
It reminds me of FF10 for some reason. I really like this picture and im glad you like it too. its good you have found a style you like, because now you can really progress....where as im still searching for my style.

sunburn
06-21-2003, 10:44 PM
thanx dude :) it's taken a long time to find something im satisifed with, but it was worth the time :)

vinnlander1313
06-21-2003, 11:44 PM
yeah you have some nice line weights there. good attitue too. nice drawing. as a crit though, you should think about composition a bit more. the way his arm is cropped looks a bit awkward. also it looks like you are avoiding drawing hands. other than that... good job. congrats on the progress. ;cap;

sunburn
06-21-2003, 11:49 PM
well like i said, this wasn't an intentional piece.. halfway through sketching, i decided it looked pretty tight so i started finishing it with definite lines and such...
if it was something i had imagined and intended to draw for real, then obvioulsy the composition would be better...thus the hands were cropped off, because there simply wasn't enough room with the original composition...

yojimbo
06-21-2003, 11:59 PM
cool pic sunburn. the only thing i notice is the way his head is completely in profile. it just looks a little awkward, with the way he's standing an all.

Yo

sunburn
06-23-2003, 12:52 AM
that was intentional yojimbo... wanted to make it look cool or something...