I dont know what to say

[Nic]

Hey I m kind o new to the sequential stuff so please dont be to harshabout my stuuf these are some o my first sequs ever
So please tell me what I could have done wrong and could do better that would be very nIce

First
http://www.artwanted.com/images/large/5737_31345.jpg

Second
http://www.artwanted.com/images/large/5737_31346.jpg


By the way the pages have nothin to do with each other

Cnc highly Appreciated
Thanx Cya Nic

[Popninja]

My advice would be to actually complete a page before posting it for a critique. You see, it's kind of hard to offer advice when half the page is missing.

Also, sequentials don't just mean panel-to-panel; they also mean page-to-page. So, with that in mind, why post two not-even-halfway finished pages...that have nothing to do with one another?

Re-post these when they are finished, please.

[Nic]

Ok I m sorry for that I havent thought about it when I ve posted them but now that you have said it to me I m gonna remember it for the next time but I thought that also the drawing section would have been wrong so I thought that as a Sequential wip this would have been the right forum

Next time I m gonna wait till I ve finished the pages

Sorry Cya Nic

[tomek]

hi nic!
i have a one big advice for you: stop copying madureira. you should work on you own style, don't become just a clone of somebody.

just my opinion,
thomas;bat;

[Nic]

Hey Tomek ich versteh schon was du meinst aber ich denk nicht das es so schlecht is wenn ich mad als "lehrer" hab er is ja wohl auch der beste.Ich weiss das ich nich ewig nur so wie er zeichnen kann Aber ich bin noch recht jung und werde sicherlich in den nächste jahren meinen eigenen style entwickeln
Auserdem denke ich dass das jeder macht irgendwenn unbewusst zu kopieren Cih denke man sieht auch deine Einflüsse recht gut
Is wirklich nich böss gemeint da ich weis das du recht hast

Also ich werde daran arbeiten
Thanx Cya Nic