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Grendel
06-15-2003, 07:54 PM
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/freehand/page1ofnonobjectivity.jpg


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http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/freehand/page2ofnonobjectivity.jpg
benlw
06-16-2003, 11:59 AM
Once again this looks like great stuff. I don't know where this story is going but it looks interesting - what seems like quite a gritty plot-line really gels well with your style.
I know people on this forum ask this question a fair bit, but what exactly do you use to create this style - in an earlier post someone mentioned a tablet? [although I also draw/write comics i stick to the good old pencil, pen and ink combo but after seeing some of the stuff you produce I am interested in experimenting]. As always, can't wait to see more.
Grendel
06-16-2003, 12:58 PM
I usually sketch out a lay out and characters scence with pencils scan it in and digitally ink over it in photshop..though this one i drew straight in photshop.
Awesome B. Rockinsocks
06-16-2003, 01:32 PM
Nice balance of negative and positive space, you really use it well. Everytime I see new stuff from you Grendel, I am so blown away with what you've been posting lately. Keep up the great work.
Bruce Lee
06-16-2003, 02:03 PM
Panel two is pretty cool. Nice angle. One's a little dull.

Your dialogue in the balloon is a little hard to read. You should strive to make the text a little more legible. Remember, if your audience has difficulty reading what you've written down, your just wasting their time and yours. May sound like I'm naggin', but it's an important point I'm trying to convey, dude.

Not much else to say, really. Not much is happening on the page.


Loston
http://www.lostonwallace.com
Grendel
06-16-2003, 07:00 PM
added page 2
Caimano
06-19-2003, 01:49 AM
Interesting work Grendel, it reminds me some Latin American comics taste...like Munoz and Breccia, but I don't know if you're familiar with them...
Caimano
06-19-2003, 02:39 AM
Just to clarify...

this is Munoz art:

http://www.comic.de/erlangen2002/max_munozseite.gif

This is Breccia:

http://grumble.free.fr/img/course.gif

http://grumble.free.fr/img/militaires.jpg
Grendel
06-19-2003, 09:49 AM
caim- WOW thanks for the two references ..damn great stuff- I love when people introduce me to artists i dont know about--im off to check more of there stuff now - THANKS AGAIN...