Page 4 Done!!- MYSTERY CASTLE Continues [Archive]

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CWmax

06-13-2003, 06:54 AM

NEW PAGE IN THIS SEQUENCE! I'm kinda happy with it.....

Here are all 4 pages in sequence - The 4th one is new.....

PAGE URL : http://www.comicsportfolio.com/port...ArtworkID=13379

PAGE URL : http://www.comicsportfolio.com/port...ArtworkID=13216

PAGE URL : http://www.comicsportfolio.com/port...ArtworkID=13460

PAGE URL : http://www.comicsportfolio.com/portfolio/display.asp?ArtworkID=13670

Let me know what you think....

Thanks,
CW

astrocity20

06-13-2003, 10:11 PM

I like page four. Only I would probably throw in a few smaller panels. One signifying him going down the stairs. And rather than showing him before he goes to the door maybe putting more of a close up on the door itself then cut to him opening it. There are many variations to go about do that. Looks solid though. Keep it up.