The Getaway

[TheFightingFoetus]

I noticed a few details that I forgot to do, like the shoulder pad dealies in the last panel, and a few other things I won't point out.

It's late though, and time for beddy-bye. Thought I'd post this, 'cause I thought it turned out kind of nice. Feel free to comment and critique.

http://webpages.charter.net/pencilpusher//Iss2Pg3sm.jpg

[Digital Klown]

Very nice! The first thing I noticed was the variety of angles that you used... it makes your panels look exciting! The storytelling is easy to follow, which I like. Character designs look good. My only crit is the guy in the background in the fourth panel looks a bit off... but other than that, this looks like one solid sequential!

[TheFightingFoetus]

Thanks, Digital Klown. I might work on that face a little more...

[Cuddly]

That's some really sweet work! Digital Klown's right about the varied use of POVs. The storytelling's clear too, which impressed me the most, I think. A good, solid page! Can we expect more? :)

[TheFightingFoetus]

Oh yeah. It's a little slow in the coming, as I'm usually drawing commissions or wasting time, but this page is from issue 2.

Glad you can understand what's happening. That's the most important thing to me.

[Caimano]

I agree with other guys, great work here!

[whytboy]

Tight, tight. That's just good work playa.