Jav Shade sketch

[Kiem]

A redesign of one of my comic character. I'd love to get some C&C :) always helps to hear what others see wrong.

http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/female/Jav_sketch.jpg

thanks for the C&C and views :)

[caanan02]

are her clothes transparent? If not, shading it in will set of an already tight image. Like the hands [the left might be a bit small] Short of that,...you got it paht-na!

keep it up.

[vinnlander1313]

not bad. i do see some errors however. i would say that her head is WAY too big, and her neck is too long. tilt your head foreward. see how your chin comes just a few inches from your collar bones, if that. maybe if you tilt it all the way down, it will come all the way to your collar bones. in this drawing, she is titling her head forward and her chin is only coming about a fists legnth away from her collar bone. also, the muscle anatomy in her left arm is off. you need to extend her deltoid down further. i wouldnt bulk it up any, just stretch it. also, it looks like you dont understand forearm muscles and are trying to fake it. you should seek reference on that area. it is a big problem for a lot of people. i think that her right shoulder can be pushed out further. her shoulders seem too slender in comparison to her hips. lastly i would say that her legs are a bit too long. its not terribly off, and can probably be safely chalked up to style, but i would say that they look a little long to me. take care. ;cap;

[Kiem]

wow..that isn't some..that's a lot hehe...

Thanks for the feedback guys. I'll keep at it :)

Her clothes aren't transparent..I just haven't cleaned up the pic. Tend to do that last.