Sudee-Character Sketch/Design

[Senshi]

This is just a quick character sketch I did of the main character in a story I am putting together. Her name is Sudee Black and she is Cherokee Navitve American. I would love some comments and crits if you guys have the time. Oh I know the pose is kind of weird but she is supposed to be hovering and about to unleash some awesome power.
Sorry it's geocities, so I can't direct link a pic.

http://www.geocities.com/senshinoame/Sudee.html

[anders wat]

nice figure. hands are good.
The only thing that caught my attention is that one leg is too short or too long.

Keep drawing

[Senshi]

Thanks for the C&C. I am glad you pointed out the leg thing, I hadn't noticed it but now I can fix it :)

[astrocity20]

Really nice. The hair looks a bit 2d to me. and the boob on theleft is less defined as the other, the foot was already pointed out so nothing new there. Great job I really like it.

[Senshi]

:D Thanks for replying, I agree with the critiques you made. I am going to revamp this pic and post it in this thread again after I have made the necessary improvements.

[ArtGyrl]

hey senshi. really nice drawing. your art is really improving. i like her hair, and her hands are good.

[Senshi]

As promised an updated version of Sudee. I fixed the leg/foot issue and the underdefined boob. I also tweeked the hair a bit. I think it is a subtle improvement. If things look good to you guys I think I will clean it up and ink it, then color it of course.

http://www.geocities.com/senshinoame/Sudee2

and for those of you who forgot

The Original
http://www.geocities.com/senshinoame/Sudee.html

[caanan02]

You did a good job capturing the softness and youngness of her.

good work!

[Senshi]

Originally posted by caanan02
You did a good job capturing the softness and youngness of her.

good work!

Why thank you very much. I guess I will start polishing her up.
I am going to just keep posting updates of the pic in this thread because I don't want to flood the boards.