Supergirls gone wild!

[artronin9]

Hey, I haven't posted anything in awhile, I've been busy working on a couple projects, my own book, and some commissioned work, but anyways here are a couple pages I knocked out last weekend. A couple pages of three Elseworld Supergirls just simply causing as much chaos and destruction as possible. Any comments and crits?

http://www.imagemagician.org/images/artronin9/supergirl1.jpg

http://www.imagemagician.org/images/artronin9/supergirl2.jpg

http://www.imagemagician.org/images/artronin9/supergirl3.jpg

[rottenart]

this is a really great three pages! i really like the thin line style...very geoff darrow

the humour is a nice touch to the page as well...is she knocking that hole in the wall with her boob?

very slick

[ssjtom]

w00t destruction rules.

[MetaMan]

I like your style, Artronin. There's a lot going on yet it's still easy to see. Good job. ;thor;

[Roguehill]

That stuff is just screaming for color! Any chance you could put up some color stuff in the same style? I dig it!

[markenglert]

...very detailed, great work.

In the first panel, the guy in the foreground waving his arm...in fact, everyone on the left side of the vanishing point, seem to be either standing boxes or have very long legs.

The Superheroine figures are well drawn, but i wish they were more dynamic.

Awesome stuff here, brotha.

[jniffen]

I could be mistaken, but I only see two pages here.:confused:

Aside from that, it's not a style that I'm used to, but it is still quite good and detailed. The only thing that I can see you need to work on is spotting blacks. You have none here.

[anders wat]

panel 1, page 2

That's hilarius, butt-check a car!!!

[Bruce Lee]

Not bad! Very Geoff Darrow. Some of the cars need some work though around the wheel areas. Sort of bugs me that you start off with the shadows in panel one, but for the remainder of the artwork you don't indicate any sort of lighting whatsoever. Seems a little inconsistant. Ditch the shadows in panel one, or add more throughout.

The super women's hips are a little odd. Their hips need more pelvic tilt.

Good work.

Loston
http://www.lostonwallace.com

[T-1000]

You were influenced by Geof Darrow, right? ;)

[artronin9]

Sat down today and decided to crank out a third page. Yes I did this page in one afternoon. Now my hand hurts. I've posted it with the other 2 pages.

Thanks for the comments guys. Yes, you could say I'm influenced by Geoff Darrow, but my style was progressing towards this style before I really even knew who he was. But since I've discovered him he's probably my favorite artist and I study his stuff religiously, but I don't make a concentrated effort to draw just like him.