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[tomek]

here are pages 3 and 4 of a test-script a get from an editor. because it's a test-script i'm forcing myself to spend not more than one day for each page.
what do you thing about my ballance between quality and quickness? or just leave an comment. thanks!

pages 1 and 2 are here (http://www.penciljack.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=30632)

page 3
http://www.droidtropolis.com/MV_3_low.jpg
it's a head up display surrounding the woman in panel 7...
page 4
http://www.droidtropolis.com/MV_4_low.jpg
downed UFO in last panel... i'm just telling it before you ask;)

[chynco]

not bad my friend. quantity vs. quality is always a problem i face. but that's a decision you gotta make on your own. anywho i think yous done good here. not too many mistakes from waht i see. except for my spelling... bah.

only little things that irk me are in the second page. that second panel is a bit confusing. i think it'd be clearer if you pulled outa little on that one. at first i thogut it was someone holding a gun or something... and they were floating in space as a ship flew by. and the last panel would be better if the figure was pulled out from behind the panel a little more... IMO

ok peas out yo.

[mysterious irish guy]

Nice stuff, Tomek. Not much wrong with the panels at all. I kinda agree with the quibble about page panel 2 but it only needs small adjustment. Whose the test page for?

Cheers
Kieran

[tomek]

thanks for your constructive comments. i agree with you both, that panel 2/pg2 is a bit confusing, this was the last panel i did on that page i my motvation ran out...;)
the editor sent me an e-mail that i get that job. it's a small publisher in florida, i'm not sure if i can talk about it yet.

[markenglert]

...how long of a "day" are you putting into these?

The level of detail looks good to me. Though I'd put some stars and junk into the space backgrounds... which can be easily done in the inking of coloring stage.

The only panel I have a big problem with is panel 5 on page two. It just isn't nearly as good as everything else.

[tomek]

Originally posted by markenglert
...how long of a "day" are you putting into these?

The only panel I have a big problem with is panel 5 on page two. It just isn't nearly as good as everything else.

first: a day means 12-14 hours
second: you are damn right! i hate this panel, even more: it makes me sick! some better perspective came to my mind, but it was to late to change it... but maybe i'll still do it...