View Full Version : Dallas Powers 10 pages
05-19-2003, 08:52 AM
This a short called Dallas Powers, written by Jen Contino, writer for the Pulse and Sequential Tart, and me. I did the pencils, inks, lettering, etc. all the visual. I think it's one of my better works, though I always see flaws in it afterwards. Either way, just click on the page and you get to the next page, it's about 10 pages.
05-19-2003, 03:22 PM
I never expected what happened! :)
05-19-2003, 04:12 PM
guess I'll try again later
05-21-2003, 12:00 PM
It should be fine now
05-22-2003, 07:24 AM
Nice twist. I like the way you set up your pages too. Great use of blacks as well.
05-22-2003, 03:04 PM
yo this is slick stuff man, i like it a lot, cool ending.
i think you could fix the black "bang" in the third panel.. i think it'd look clearer in white.
the second panel on the third page was a bit confusing at first. i had to look back and fourth to realize what it was. maybe pulling back and showing a little more of the scene would clear things up a bit.
the page where the man gives the bartender money is odd, that shift in angle is really weird. at first i thougt it was just his sleeve or something.
anywho cool pages anywho. good little story.
05-26-2003, 05:35 PM
didnt expect the end. pretty good! i like the nice use of blacks!
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