Dallas Powers 10 pages

[shazb0t]

This a short called Dallas Powers, written by Jen Contino, writer for the Pulse and Sequential Tart, and me. I did the pencils, inks, lettering, etc. all the visual. I think it's one of my better works, though I always see flaws in it afterwards. Either way, just click on the page and you get to the next page, it's about 10 pages.


http://navarroart.tripod.com/id135.htm

[Johnny Blaque]

Really nice!

I never expected what happened! :)

[markenglert]

...temporarily unavailable.

guess I'll try again later

[shazb0t]

It should be fine now

[Spidey]

Nice twist. I like the way you set up your pages too. Great use of blacks as well.

[chynco]

yo this is slick stuff man, i like it a lot, cool ending.

i think you could fix the black "bang" in the third panel.. i think it'd look clearer in white.

the second panel on the third page was a bit confusing at first. i had to look back and fourth to realize what it was. maybe pulling back and showing a little more of the scene would clear things up a bit.

the page where the man gives the bartender money is odd, that shift in angle is really weird. at first i thougt it was just his sleeve or something.

anywho cool pages anywho. good little story.

[flamingpoolstick]

didnt expect the end. pretty good! i like the nice use of blacks!