Nightmare sequence

[Temperance]

More pages fixed and up. I've submitted page 14 and 15 before, but these have been redrawn after suggestions from the last time. pages 16 and 17 are new.
Basic run down:
Page 14
nightmare ... wooo scary
Page 15
wake from nightmare, besides the initial scream, she's pretty used to these nightmares, thus, she's pretty subdued after the fact
Page 16 and 17
I took this layout from Terry Moore's Strangers in Paradise high school issue where it shows Katchoo and Francine getting up in the morning.

The lo-down of the plot is: the woman has been ordered to kill the man via a poison soaked on the box, meanwhile the man has to kill the woman, but both of them are hesitant about doing it.
Bleh... there you have it then. please tell me what you think, I'd appreciate any feedback.
Page 14 (http://www.deviantart.com/view/1918100)
Page 15 (http://www.deviantart.com/view/1918182)
Page 16 (http://www.deviantart.com/view/1918288)
Page 17 (http://www.deviantart.com/view/1921259)

[xadrian]

Is the guy changing clothes some how with some kind of power? There's weird blobs on him and he's wearing two/three different things.

Otherwise, the story flows pretty good considering you're doing counterpoint between two locations.

[Temperance]

He's wearing a BOB A bio organic body suit. Think of it as a mechanical AI mixed with Venom. It can change shape from one thing to another... how to make it change and appear as such is tough unfortunately I don't have much reference to work from. If you can suggest a different approach to how to make it morph frlom panel to panel, I'd love the help ^_^;;;