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meshuggahan
05-13-2003, 08:29 PM
Quick sketch I did one night, I know his head is too big. Any other Crits??http://www.deviantart.com/view/1902778 http://www.deviantart.com/view/1902778
yojimbo
05-13-2003, 08:40 PM
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meshuggahan
05-13-2003, 11:17 PM
now under deviant
astrocity20
05-14-2003, 04:35 PM
He's just very stiff. You have potential just get the proportions down and try to loosen up the figure.
xbrutalizerx
05-14-2003, 05:48 PM
I agree. The anatomical correctness is amazing, however, he looks like he's marching. Your style is way cool as well.
ramoutar
05-14-2003, 10:06 PM
Overall the sketch is damn good. Much better than anything I can draw.
The foreshortening is awesome and the anatomy is great.
The only things that might be of concern is that the sketch does look a little stiff, and he looks a little...squat. The proportions look like they need to be ironed out a bit.
meshuggahan
05-15-2003, 01:23 AM
Thanks for the comments, I agree he does look stiff. I noticed th shoulders look a bit small. Anatomy wise I have a suggestion for anyone, Strength Training Anatomy By Frederic Delavier It's good workout book but it also has good pics showing the diffrent excercises. It breaks down the muscles used, shows how they contract and how they attach to the bone. Better than any art book I've seen.