A Sketch I'd like some C&C on

[Kiem]

Well, I've improved a little in the pass few months and I'm hoping that with more C&C from you guys, I can take another step in the right direction...

http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/Aleara_Sketch.jpg

Thanks in advance for viewing and C&C'ing :)

[CS]

her torso looks a bit thin; here ribs jutting out look like they stick out further than her breasts. also, her hand is strange, but I'm not sure i can help with that.
http://nowhereman.blackhand.com/junk/overlay.jpg