"fly" page 7 at last!

[FlepDjec]

mmmm

they say the worst artist is a lazay artist, so i guess thats me, but i finally finished this fine story by richie daley.

i'll post up the complete story as soon as i get back home, beer is calling now.;dvl;

7 and last!
http://www.geocities.com/flepdjec/finished07.txt

[chynco]

i like his movement from the left to the right. but you seem to make him go backwards a bit in the last panel. i think if you keep that progression of him moving farther and farther to the right it would be pretty cool.

[FlepDjec]

i see your point, it looks a bit like a cut off sequence, but i wanted him to move almost out of the third panel to suggest him leaving the office. iam not to pleased with the last panel anyway, but ive spend to much time on this one, so ill use all advice in my next comic: "what you wish for", so stay tuned!:)