The Anonymous Action Crew

[riq]

this is just an excuse to do something sequential.. I did it totally on the fly( even I don't know what's going on).. maybe I find out later.

http://www.creativeion.com/riq/penciljack/taac.jpg

[chynco]

I know whats happening,

1- man says "HOLY SHIT, someone droped a marble brownie on the street!!!!"

2- the crowd is exited. people yell "WHERE? WHERE? MINE!! MINE!! HANDS OFF!!"

3 - man pushes his way through the crwod for it "It's MINE SUCKA!!!! other man "HELL NAH BEEYOTCH!!!

4 - man dives for marbled brownie "AWW YEAH, brownie goodness here i co..."

5- man touches "brownie" and then realizes his mistake by smelling it "....AWW SHIT..this ain't got any brownie goodness to it at all!!!" other man "EEEEEWWWWW"

6 - a police man arrives... says "I'm lonely"

[riq]

So it is said. So it is recorded. The gods smile upon your noble effort;thor; From henceforth the brownie goodness shall be guarded until the gods choose otherwise.

[Justice41]

Hey Riq. Pretty good but you have something weird going on with the perspective in panel 2. The people are walking upright but the cars and the guy on the bike are going downhill fast. Unless that's San Fran You may want to adjust the street objects.( I know you won't because this was just for fun). I like how you kept the camera on the same side throughout. Good job.
From what I see, two hoods are looking for someone that's obviously wounded. You may want to open up your drawings somewhat.
For fun have the guy on the bike cartwheeling or getting up from taking a spill. Sorta like in an airplane movie.