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EddieChingLives
05-05-2003, 09:25 PM
AS OF FRIDAY MAY 16TH 2003 THIS IS THE MOST RESCENT PIC

Backstory:ONE EYE'D JACK LOST HIS EYEBALL, AND TRIED TO GET IT BACK. A MAD OGRE DETONATED IT, IT EXPLODED, HE WAS NOW OBDUCTED BY ALIENS, BUT THERE'S MORE ALIENS OUT TO GET REVENGE ON JACK. BUT WHILE JACK IS ON A SPACESHIP, THE TWO BULLIES BREAK INTO JACKS HOUSE INSTEAD. WHAT DO YOU EXPECT FOR AN AD-LIB COMIC.

http://aftershock.250free.com/OEJ32.jpg

For those of you who haven't read it from the beginning and want to, here's where it starts:
http://aftershock.250free.com/oej1.htm

Thanks guys. Any coments or critiques are welcome and quite frankly needed.

Johnny Blaque
05-05-2003, 09:34 PM
Lol, I like your comic. My favorite panel was the one with the cool perspective and Jack is saying "Thats my House!". THe only thing wrong with that pic is that his head is in a completely diff. perspective from the rest of his body and picture.

Cool stuff, I need to start one of these.:)

EddieChingLives
05-06-2003, 10:31 AM
Thanks for pointing that out Johnny Blaque. I didn't notice that at all.

Making a web comic using ms paint is kinda cool, because it eliminates any excuses why you can't do a web comic. I just wish you could resize. And the conversion to jpeg is pretty ugly. And if you go to gif, it kills all your color. Good luck. And I can't wait to see your online comic when you do it.

And special thanks to Brandon for drawing me that One-Eyed-Jack with a Panda strapped to his back. I just finally got to print that out and it's in my binder and hanging on my wall.

EddieChingLives
05-08-2003, 11:18 AM
coff..coff..coff....ahem.....excuse me guys. I got this really bad cough. coff....coff..... justbumpingthisuptogetmoreviews..... coff..coff..... you'll have to excuse me.

TheFightingFoetus
05-08-2003, 11:57 PM
Fun stuff, EC! The MS-Paint adds to the humor. :)

Nice work for MS-Paint, too.

EddieChingLives
05-09-2003, 08:48 AM
Thank you so much for the good words. I was getting desperate for responses for a moment there. I was tempted to have jack hold up a cute bunny and demand a response or little fluffy would get it. Thanks to you, little fluffy will live to see another day. Thanks FF.

EddieChingLives
05-09-2003, 10:05 AM
CLICK HERE TO SEE JACK TAKE A BUNNY HOSTAGE.
http://aftershock.250free.com/WARNING.jpg

CLICK THE LINK TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT...YOU SICK FREAK...
http://aftershock.250free.com/WARNING%20GOOD%20ENOUGH.jpg

TheFightingFoetus
05-09-2003, 11:49 AM
It is real hard getting replies in here sometimes. Just chalk it up to sequentials having so many images and such to crit. I don't know how Loston found the time to give us all those huge crits all the time, but he's the man for having done so.

Just put the bunny down man...nobody wants to see anybunny get hurt here. Slowly put the bunny down. You remember Fonzie? Be cool like Fonzie, and put the bunny down...

:D

EddieChingLives
05-09-2003, 11:53 AM
LOL

Sorry, I get bored sometimes. But go ahead and click on the link. It's not what you think. BUNNY GET'S REVENGE.

The replies don't bug me. As long as people are looking, that's all that matters.

FlepDjec
05-09-2003, 12:02 PM
muuuhahhaha, thats bunny...aaah, funny:confused:

TheFightingFoetus
05-09-2003, 01:56 PM
Heh...missed the link before.

EddieChingLives
05-16-2003, 10:20 PM
*bump*

I updated another pic...

Scroll up to the top of the page if you haven't allready seen it...

TheFightingFoetus
05-16-2003, 10:56 PM
LOL

That's great...

FlepDjec
05-17-2003, 02:15 AM
waaaaa! i read the whole story! its hillarious! think i prefer your cousins version;)