Redline Preview Page 2

[I.C.E. Zurel]

This is the penciled version of Page two. I'll post a cropped colored version in the future. The title is in an animated cell style.

Created by Troy Zurel & Ronnie Werner

http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/Redline_Preview_Page_2_Issue_1.jpg

Hope that you enjoy.

[eonprez]

Nice work...I wish more artists would pay more attention to objects like automobiles and things like that. You have a nice clean style that leaves little for an inker to interpret. I would like to see how an inker would do on this. I think you could use a little more detial in your cliff backgrounds. All in all though...very good. I can sense the urgancy from the Jeep shot to the character's reaction to being shot at.

PS...for seom reason your style reminds me of the artist that currently works on Batgirl.

-Brett
EON

[Darren Schwindaman]

looks nice. I really dig the style. between the top and bottom panels, the changing of direction really screws with me. all of a sudden, he goes from moving right to left to moving in the opposite direction. First thought to me is that it's a different jeep or something. check out scott mcdaniel's site for more info, but basically, it's a concept called the "action axis." they use it in movies too. basically, you can move the camera anywhere top to bottom, or at any angle, as long as the position of people isn't flipped. check out the site, he explains it much better than i can. otherwise, great page!