Unfinished Top Cow entry

[jiza]

Here's a page that I tried to do for the top cow contest. As you can see there's not much to look at. I was goofing around the past couple of months and just never got to finishing the pages.

http://www.comicsportfolio.com/portfolio/display.asp?ArtworkID=12777

[cabralsoth]

dude what were you thinking ... you totally shoulda finished it up ... i know it was hard but from the looks of it you coulda did a bang up job ... i posted mine a few days ago ... its almost down to the bottom of the page , check it out ....

[whibbage]

aww... you should finish it up! It looks pretty good so far~

[jiza]

Thanks for the comments. I really feel stupid for not finishing it. I believed I had a very good chance to win this thing but I'm the king of procrastination. Anyway I'm going to finish these pages up soon and I'll post everything when I'm done.

[EddieChingLives]

Your hands could use some work. The third panel, the fingers aren't consistant. And from what I see, you should really sketch the foundation first, then tighten up and finish. You got finished inks on panels that eren't even completely concieved of yet. It's crazy. Nice inking, and great job on the girls face.

[jiza]

Thanks for the critique Eddie. It's all pencil I haven't inked it, the lines just came out really dark. I noticed the hand in the third panel also, the pinky and thumb are really off. Once I get to finishing this I'll try to fix what I can. Thanks again.