Artwork

[Kappa]

Hello people.
This is my first post, here. It's the first page of a comic story I'm creating... do you like it? Let me know...

Marco

http://www.klavadesign.com/Images/GGtav1.jpg
http://www.klavadesign.com/Images/GanzGhenau.jpg

[chynco]

howdy,

nice pages, i have no idea what's goign on in them but they look cool. it's a nice simple style. you're able to keep characters unique and consistantly looking the same.

I don't like the very first panel, it's too static. too boring. why dont you position the ship at an angle.

the second page seems to skip aaround too much... where did all those people come from?

i hoep the words will help tell teh story.. cuz the art isn't too clear.

[Kappa]

The second page is actually the third. In the second you'll see the crew of USS Stakanov waking up from hybernation.
All will be explained by balloons in the final edit.

[Kappa]

The name of the story is: "Buzzworld". Sthe USS Stakanov's crew wakes up from hybernation, just in time to be informed that the firm they are workig for has declared bankrupt. The police wants to keep the ship but they escape on a planet called Buzzworld, where they have friends... but there's more: the Empire is secretely interested about the plans of the new engine which will sport the USS Stakanov, allowing for the first time to reach warp-speed (in fact all the other ships still use hybernation). And so on...
PS: sorry for my bad english... I hope you'll understand what I mean...

[Kappa]

Not yet finished, but quite good, I think...

http://www.klavadesign.com/Images/GGtav4.jpg