May Sentaro

[TheFightingFoetus]

http://webpages.charter.net/pencilpusher/sentaro_01_02_CMYK.jpg

Some of you may have seen this in the pencilled stage before, hope you like it finished.

Colors and inks by Hsad Nitram, boy genius.

[Paul M.]

I am blown away man.

[TheFightingFoetus]

Dude I'm sorry, next time I'll use some Listerine, or something.

[TheFightingFoetus]

*Bump

[saTHOMASo]

i did already dig the pencil version .... but that it would so totally kickass with ink and colors thrown on i would have never expected! :eek:


awesome, dude! ;onei;

[EasyRider]

Veeerrrry Nice... I gotta admit, I was a little skeptical about the pencils, but the finished product has turned out very nice indeed. Kudos to you, man.

GOD, I wish I had time to work on some of my own stuff... AAARRGGH!
STUPID, STUPID BOSS CREATURES!

[whibbage]

I agree with Easy Rider, the colors really helped it out XD

Great job~

[TheFightingFoetus]

Originally posted by whibbage
I agree with Easy Rider, the colors really helped it out XD

Great job~

Cool! Glad you guys like it...but who or what is XD?

[whibbage]

it's supposed to be a kind of anime face... sideways. like this:

=D

but you know, with the eyes clenched:

XD

[TheFightingFoetus]

LOL... Even after a few solid years of internetting, I still suck. :P

[cabralsoth]

hey fightingfoetus, i never saw the oencils but thew finished loooks great to me .... can you either put a link to the pencils or pm them to me .... i would like to see the stages .... thanks

[xadrian]

hey man, good to see you found someone to pull your weak ass pencils together.

you DID pay him right?

Seriously, your talent just floors me. Good to see this get all the way to the end.

[Bruce Lee]

Your coloring boy genius should have went with cold colors around the panel borders so that the panels would pop out more. That would separate the three panels and give more depth. Also, it's important to have some open, white space every now and then. This allows the reader a chance to breathe a little.

Not bad man, but I think panel two isn't nearly as important as panel three. I think I might have made the last panel the anchor panel of the page, since that's where the action takes place. Your layout would still work though, if there's a lot of dialogue in the second panel, but if there isn't, it seems like a waste of storytelling space to me.

Nice detailing on the scale mail armor, and I like the composition of the last panel. Raising the rider's right elbow high implies speed to the scene. Good work.

Hope my feedback was helpful to you.

Take care,


Loston
http://www.lostonwallace.com

[TheFightingFoetus]

I'M A MAGICIAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

http://dash.serveftp.com/sentaro_01_02_CMYK2.jpg


God Awful Pencils:
http://webpages.charter.net/pencilpusher/pg2.jpg

Slick Rick Inks:
http://webpages.charter.net/pencilpusher/sentaro.jpg

[Finnegan]

never heard of it :p

hey, come on now. We've been lookin at this for a week or two (forever). whens wes gets ta see sumpin new?


=BoB=

[TheFightingFoetus]

You mean, I have to do more????

:O

[twizted-art]

great lookin page :)