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The Cancerman
04-21-2003, 04:01 PM
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BliX
04-21-2003, 04:28 PM
Hey thats not bad. Looks good to me. :D
UnsungGuru
04-21-2003, 04:58 PM
I dig it. The art's good and the story flows well, but I do have one crit.

The dialogue of the Spax character smacks of The Tick. Not necessarily a bad thing, though.
The Cancerman
04-21-2003, 05:00 PM
Originally posted by UnsungGuru
I dig it. The art's good and the story flows well, but I do have one crit.

The dialogue of the Spax character smacks of The Tick. Not necessarily a bad thing, though.

That's been one of the hardest things. I'm trying to make the character all grandiose and ridiculous w/o making him a tick ripoff.
Thanks for the comments guys!:D