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M@u::

04-20-2003, 02:10 PM

what you think? thanks!

http://www.maurusso.com/pages/pages1.jpg

http://www.maurusso.com/pages/pages2.jpg

CHIZ

04-20-2003, 05:24 PM

i like it.your style is very nice

M@u::

04-28-2003, 03:20 PM

thanks Chiz molto grato;onei;

whibbage

05-01-2003, 04:07 PM

your style is pretty interesting!

However, your eyes seem to be too close together, it kinda bothers me XD but maybe this is stylistic? Your direction could be a little more exciting...

I think in the first page, first panel, the dragon looks too sweet, it's doesn't prepare me for the battle in the following panel.

I'm not really sure what's happening in the first panel of the second page. They look too far away to be interacting and I don't see the dragon throwing anything...

In the last panel, watch the tangent his fist makes with the dragon muzzle, unless this was supposed to be a punch? If so, I didn't feel the power of it.

Overall, though, not bad~! Most importantly it looks like you had a lot of fun doing this~ Is this part of a larger story? keep going =)