ys pg 4

[spyda]

ish 0 page 4 of young samurais

http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/young_samurais_isssue_0_pg_4.jpg

[Ra Havok]

Panel 1 : perspective of buildings is off. Could be personal preference, but now the buildings are kind of bland.

Panel 2: Good!

Panel 3: the foliage seems a bit weird... That's all I can crit, though. Excellent shadows!

Panel 4: nice expression on Razor's face.

Panel 5: Nice as well, although it seems a bit similar with panel 2..

As per usual, Spyda, very well drawn page. :)

[NickRocks]

i like this one better of them just sitting around...the shadows make them look really cool! great job.

[eugene]

Damn were you at hommie I havent seen anything new from you in a hot minute.

[Bruce Lee]

Welcome back, Spyda.

The perspective on the buildings in panel one does seem off a bit, and the scene change between panel two and three could be a little clearer if the characters in panel 2 weren't in shadow, but the storytelling throughout is pretty good.

Nice work!

Loston

[stacface]

Very Nice.

[Popninja]

Welcome back, Spyda.

The perspective on the buildings in panel one does seem off a bit, and the scene change between panel two and three could be a little clearer if the characters in panel 2 weren't in shadow, but the storytelling throughout is pretty good.

Nice work!

Loston

Welcome back?! It's a nearly three year old thread!!

I ran into Spyda in San Diego this past summer. He's doing some great work still, he just doesn't post it here anymore.