chick sketch.. plz C&C. Im really pleased with this one guys

[Killer_gym_sox]

finally someting im actually sorta pleased with.. i know theres some mess ups and stuff but this was a sketch after all.. Tell me if im getting better (fatmancomics, vinnlander13, and everyone else who has seen my other *cough* junk!) I actually like what i did with this.. If you view this page plz comment.. i need lots of comments if possible.. Hope you enjoy..

http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/chick_design_sketch.jpg


well whattya think?

[Killer_gym_sox]

i see problems with the legs (i have a problem with legs) the eyes look kinda strange.. and the arm that is up is different.. the hand is smaller (i think) Do you guys agree

[InkDrop]

Originally posted by Killer_gym_sox
i see problems with the legs (i have a problem with legs) the eyes look kinda strange.. and the arm that is up is different.. the hand is smaller (i think) Do you guys agree

yep, yep, and yep. I the eyes are too large and don't comform to the face, lose the stroke above her right knee ( I think that will help)...her left forearm is in serious need of a strech'n...and perhaps drop the red bg...it's pretty harsh on the eyes.
Keep drawing man. Break out some ref. and go to it.

PEACE,
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