daredevil30269
04-14-2003, 01:48 AM
Guys can you please help me? I am using this speach that I wrote for a comic for Epic. I am hoping to use it for the opening. I just want to know does this sound like something Captain America would say.
A Day Marvel Will Never Forget
A Tribute To 9/11
PAGE ONE
PANEL ONE:
Close up of the Silver Surfer looking down.
PANEL TWO:
Establishing shot of down town Manhattan were the towers once stood. High above ground zero the Silver Surfer stares watching the crowd that has come to pay tribute to remember the love ones they lost that day.
1 CAPTAIN AMERICA: IT IS IMPORTANT THAT EACH OF US, AS AMERICANS, WITNESSES TO HISTORY, AND AS HUMAN BEINGS REMEMBER WHAT HAPPENED A YEAR AGO THIS DAY.
PANEL THREE:
Long medium shot seen through a camera lens. Captain America stands at a podium. Wasp, Yellow Jacket, Vision, Wanda, Fury, as JJ stands next to the mayor and president behind Cap.
2 CAPTAIN AMERICA: WHEN TWO AIRPLANES CRASHED INTO THE TOWERS AND CHANGED THE WORLD AS WE KNOW IT, EVIL REVEALED ITSELF IN HOPES THAT IN DOING THIS, THEIR ACTIONS WOULD WEAKEN OUR NATION.
PANEL FOUR:
Medium shot of Ben Grimm. He has a little girl on his shoulder that is holding a sign saying “we miss you daddy” in crayon. Alicia and several people around him are holding flowers and pictures of loved ones they lost.
3 CAPTAIN AMERICA: THAT DAY, IN OUR DARKEST HOUR, MEN AND WOMEN STOOD AS A NATION UNITED AND PROCLAIMED, "NO YOU WILL NOT BEAT US."
PAGE TWO
PANEL ONE:
Balcony shot of Iron Man and Thor are about to land in front of the Pentagon. A crowd of people, Union Jack and Black Panther are waiting for them.
1 CAPTION: TODAY WE SHOULD REMEMBER WHAT HAPPENED,
PANEL TWO:
Medium shot of the heroes hugging and paying their respects to those that died at the Pentagon.
2 CAPTION: AS WELL AS REMEMBER THE HEROES THAT DIED TRYING TO SAVE LIVES, EVERY AMERICAN WHO HAS STOOD TALL AND SHARED THEIR LOVE TO THOSE THAT LOST.
PANEL THREE:
Union Jack and a woman stand putting a little American and British flag next to a memorial site of those that died there.
3 CAPTION: TO THOSE MEN AND WOMEN WHO AT THIS MOMENT ARE A HALF A WORLD AWAY FIGHTING FOR FREEDOM, TRYING TO KEEP A FRAGILE PEACE IN A LAND THAT HAS NOT SEEN IT IN YEARS.
PANEL FOUR:
Iron Man puts is hand on the shoulder of a little boy. The boy is in tears and looking at him as if asking why as both stand looking at were the plane crashed into the Pentagon.
4 CAPTION: PRESIDENT LINCOLN SAID A LINE IN THE GETTYSBURG ADDRESS THAT IS FITTING. "AS A FINAL RESTING PLACE FOR THOSE, WHO HERE GAVE THEIR LIVES THAT THAT NATION MIGHT LIVE."
PANEL FIVE:
Straight on shot of several men and women who lost people that was in the plane. All of them are holding hands and praying.
5 CAPTION: "IT IS ALTOGETHER FITTING AND PROPER THAT WE SHOULD DO THIS." LINCOLN WENT ON TO SAY. "BUT IN A LARGER SENSE WE CANNOT HALLOW THIS GROUND. THE BRAVE MEN, LIVING AND DEAD, WHO STRUGGLED HERE HAVE CONSECRATED IT FAR ABOVE OUR POOR POWER TO ADD OR DETRACT."
PAGE THREE
INSERT PANEL ONE:
Full figure shot of Captain America, holding a little boy’s hand looks down at the ceremonial graves.
1 CAPTAIN AMERICA: YES EVIL WAS RIGHT. WE HAVE CHANGED.
INSERT PANEL TWO:
Extreme close-up of Captain America’s face. An expression of absolute sorrow over comes him and a tear falls down his face.
2 CAPTAIN AMERICA: WE ARE UNITED AND STRONGER THAN EVER. TODAY, WE HONOR THOSE THAT DIED AND LIVED.
FULL PAGE PANEL:
Close-up of the ceremonial grave. There are flowers; pictures and a note attached to Captain America’s shield saying we miss you in a child’s writing in crayon.
3 CAPTAIN AMERICA: THANK YOU. WE WILL NEVER FORGET YOU.
A Day Marvel Will Never Forget
A Tribute To 9/11
PAGE ONE
PANEL ONE:
Close up of the Silver Surfer looking down.
PANEL TWO:
Establishing shot of down town Manhattan were the towers once stood. High above ground zero the Silver Surfer stares watching the crowd that has come to pay tribute to remember the love ones they lost that day.
1 CAPTAIN AMERICA: IT IS IMPORTANT THAT EACH OF US, AS AMERICANS, WITNESSES TO HISTORY, AND AS HUMAN BEINGS REMEMBER WHAT HAPPENED A YEAR AGO THIS DAY.
PANEL THREE:
Long medium shot seen through a camera lens. Captain America stands at a podium. Wasp, Yellow Jacket, Vision, Wanda, Fury, as JJ stands next to the mayor and president behind Cap.
2 CAPTAIN AMERICA: WHEN TWO AIRPLANES CRASHED INTO THE TOWERS AND CHANGED THE WORLD AS WE KNOW IT, EVIL REVEALED ITSELF IN HOPES THAT IN DOING THIS, THEIR ACTIONS WOULD WEAKEN OUR NATION.
PANEL FOUR:
Medium shot of Ben Grimm. He has a little girl on his shoulder that is holding a sign saying “we miss you daddy” in crayon. Alicia and several people around him are holding flowers and pictures of loved ones they lost.
3 CAPTAIN AMERICA: THAT DAY, IN OUR DARKEST HOUR, MEN AND WOMEN STOOD AS A NATION UNITED AND PROCLAIMED, "NO YOU WILL NOT BEAT US."
PAGE TWO
PANEL ONE:
Balcony shot of Iron Man and Thor are about to land in front of the Pentagon. A crowd of people, Union Jack and Black Panther are waiting for them.
1 CAPTION: TODAY WE SHOULD REMEMBER WHAT HAPPENED,
PANEL TWO:
Medium shot of the heroes hugging and paying their respects to those that died at the Pentagon.
2 CAPTION: AS WELL AS REMEMBER THE HEROES THAT DIED TRYING TO SAVE LIVES, EVERY AMERICAN WHO HAS STOOD TALL AND SHARED THEIR LOVE TO THOSE THAT LOST.
PANEL THREE:
Union Jack and a woman stand putting a little American and British flag next to a memorial site of those that died there.
3 CAPTION: TO THOSE MEN AND WOMEN WHO AT THIS MOMENT ARE A HALF A WORLD AWAY FIGHTING FOR FREEDOM, TRYING TO KEEP A FRAGILE PEACE IN A LAND THAT HAS NOT SEEN IT IN YEARS.
PANEL FOUR:
Iron Man puts is hand on the shoulder of a little boy. The boy is in tears and looking at him as if asking why as both stand looking at were the plane crashed into the Pentagon.
4 CAPTION: PRESIDENT LINCOLN SAID A LINE IN THE GETTYSBURG ADDRESS THAT IS FITTING. "AS A FINAL RESTING PLACE FOR THOSE, WHO HERE GAVE THEIR LIVES THAT THAT NATION MIGHT LIVE."
PANEL FIVE:
Straight on shot of several men and women who lost people that was in the plane. All of them are holding hands and praying.
5 CAPTION: "IT IS ALTOGETHER FITTING AND PROPER THAT WE SHOULD DO THIS." LINCOLN WENT ON TO SAY. "BUT IN A LARGER SENSE WE CANNOT HALLOW THIS GROUND. THE BRAVE MEN, LIVING AND DEAD, WHO STRUGGLED HERE HAVE CONSECRATED IT FAR ABOVE OUR POOR POWER TO ADD OR DETRACT."
PAGE THREE
INSERT PANEL ONE:
Full figure shot of Captain America, holding a little boy’s hand looks down at the ceremonial graves.
1 CAPTAIN AMERICA: YES EVIL WAS RIGHT. WE HAVE CHANGED.
INSERT PANEL TWO:
Extreme close-up of Captain America’s face. An expression of absolute sorrow over comes him and a tear falls down his face.
2 CAPTAIN AMERICA: WE ARE UNITED AND STRONGER THAN EVER. TODAY, WE HONOR THOSE THAT DIED AND LIVED.
FULL PAGE PANEL:
Close-up of the ceremonial grave. There are flowers; pictures and a note attached to Captain America’s shield saying we miss you in a child’s writing in crayon.
3 CAPTAIN AMERICA: THANK YOU. WE WILL NEVER FORGET YOU.