pure suck

[SLACKER1701]

heres a page, im none too proud of this one, lemme know what you think

http://thumbs.deviantart.com/300W-96A096/large/indyart/indymisc/REDUX_complete_page.jpg

[Cuddly]

I like it! I just wish the scan was bigger so I could see more detail. Like the background texture in Panel 4 - that looks interesting! Right now, the storytelling's not too clear, but a larger scan (about 600 pixels across?) may help clear some of that up.

[cabralsoth]

is this going to be a published book?? if so how do i go about getting a copy?i love your art ...

[SLACKER1701]

oh yeah its gonna be, its all part of the comic I'm So Goth, which circles around Colette the girl with the bone swirly pigtails, its gonna be printed, and it should be available by summer, and definately at the WIZARD WORLD CHICAGO convention, so if your there, look for us

[SLACKER1701]

here it is bigger, much much bigger

http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/REDUX_complete_page.jpg

[Overcaffeinated]

I like it. A lot. The only problem I can spot is that the shape of the bald guy's jaw doesn't look entirely right on the last panel. I think it's a tad too big. Also, that panel could use some extra thickness in the characters' outline, like the rest.

Could you tell us why you don't like it?