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Snake
04-03-2003, 08:52 AM
let me know what you think this is a work in progress

Plot:

The third world war left the world in ruins every thing that man had created in their glory was destroyed. In the aftermath of the fighting all of North America is united under one leader to rebuild. In the New America all that is unhealthy is illegal. Under the cover of the perfect society some elements within the government still strive to create new and better weapons, which are tested on unsuspecting men and women. As New America rises from the ashes of the once proud North America the small percent of the population that is seen as undesirable do rejecting the new way of life or criminal nature are driven to No Mans Land. No Mans Land was once Toronto but now it is a dark paradise it is the one place where a person is actually free any more.
In the darkness of No Mans Land a small group of outcast have banded together to protect those who can’t protect themselves and strive to survive the best they can in their dark Paradise.


Characters:

Eve Adams- Eve is an ex-cop approximately twenty-five to thirty years old with a serious disposition. Eve left the force after her husband died in an explosion at a research centre, she has always blamed the government for her loss and wants nothing to do with it.

Jake Turner- Jake is a washed up boxer live on the streets in No Mans Land approximately thirty to thirty-five years old. Jake was unstoppable in the boxing ring where he was known as the Snake, but after the entertainment industry died in Las Vegas he couldn’t catch a break so he moved into No Mans Land to get away from every thing.

Frank Smith- Frank male approximately twenty-six currently living in No Mans Land. Frank is your average all around nice guy before he moving into No Mans Land he owned a chain of used car dealerships. Frank moved to No Mans Land after smoking and Drinking became illegal. Currently known through No Mans Land as the brew master.

General Stokem- John Stokem is a highly decorated General approximately fifty years old. General John Stokem fought bravely in the war and had the scars to prove it. When the war ended he took a job in Military research and Development and now only cares about creating the perfect weapon. Stokem test his weapons on people he has grabbed out of the No Mans Land. Stokes is viewed even by his co-workers as insane.

banshee
04-03-2003, 09:16 AM
welcome to Penciljack, Snake and welcome to thewriters desk!

Overall, a very interesting premise and it has to be said, very timely as well. buuut no political allegory here hehe

typo check-
she has always blamed the government for her lose

- Loss

A lil bit of nitpicking here-

- does north america include canada here?
- why would they encompass the whole of North America under one leader? who decided that? How is the leader elected? or is he "chosen" ?a military man? is

I liked toronto when I visited hehe, it was like a longer time than I care to remember though lol Sooooooo.... but I digress..

I like it. Has all the right "group of outcasts that cld save mankind" bits in it. :) well thought of!

looking fwd to seeing more!

B.

Snake
04-03-2003, 11:35 AM
"I have no political agenda here" :rolleyes:

but seriously

my writing always seems to reflect worst case senerio of whats going on in the news

Ya Canada is included as part of North America

I was thinking like a elected war hero who takes control




oh and on a side note us Canadians should be over in Iraq kicking ass ;bp;

banshee
04-03-2003, 09:01 PM
LOL no, I guess its b/c war always happens and ppl never learn from history lol part of human nature though.

u and I disagree maybe reg: war. Canada is well out of it lol SEnd in the mounties? lol

ok, promise to stop referring to stereotypes!

looking fwd to seeing more!

later days
B.