A strange sketch [Archive]

Ncyte77Etern

04-01-2003, 09:50 AM

A bit different from my usual subject matter, but thought it was interesting enough to share.

http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/anime/Vagabond_Grinder.jpg

dfbovey

04-01-2003, 09:56 AM

Proportions are a bit off in spots. The upper arms are too long for example. Right hand is too big.

I like the shading in the face and on his shirt. The monkey is really well done as well.

saTHOMASo

04-01-2003, 09:59 AM

i agree about the upper arms being too long ... resize them smaller and make the lower arms a little longer therefor ... rest is looking really cool :)

Saturn Lad

04-01-2003, 12:04 PM

I think his left arm is ok. The elbow is lining up around his belly-button and his hand is around mid-thigh. If it's too long, it's just by a hair. Plus he's just tall and lankey. But his right arm that is turning the crank is the one with the problem. Since his torso isn't tilted to allow one arm to hang lower than the other, the elbows should line up with one another. But otherwise, it's a really tight piece. I like the monkey too... does that kind have a tail?

Ncyte77Etern

04-01-2003, 12:34 PM

Critiques noted. Thanks Bovey (long time no see), saTHOMASo, Saturn Lad.

I like the monkey too... does that kind have a tail?

It's actually a chimp....I think they have bob like tails if any...

Saturn Lad

04-01-2003, 02:35 PM

Originally posted by Ncyte77Etern

It's actually a chimp....I think they have bob like tails if any...

I guess the big ears should have made it obvious, eh? :o It just seemed so small for a chimp I didn't think of it... He's just a yung'un. Thanks.