New story

[harmonix]

This is a story that I've been working on. I still need an artist, but I would love to know what you all thought about it.



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[MutantLeprechaun]

Nice , I like that your story has a message to it. I'd flesh out your character descriptions a bit more, maybe give some hints to the personality and motivations of the characters. You should post this at the writer's desk, I'm sure you'd get some more input there ;cap;

-Mutie