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04-13-2012, 08:19 AM
Here we go again!
Tackling an Avengers script this time.
Crits welcome, but I only have roughs at this point, but I'll get on these as soon as possible.
04-13-2012, 08:21 AM
For reference, here are the actual published pages.
04-13-2012, 08:27 AM
There are some parts I think I could zoom in more to make things more exciting, but I'm afraid I might lose the reader. I'll sleep on it and think about where to make some changes.
04-13-2012, 06:17 PM
Update, just tweaked some things.
04-28-2012, 04:11 AM
05-02-2012, 01:16 PM
05-03-2012, 11:33 AM
Another update...pages almost done! Crits welcome!
05-03-2012, 01:47 PM
I think those last pages are brilliant; easy to read, varying angles, consistent faces and anatomy, solid perspective. These are some of the best pages I've seen on PJ. Are these for submission?
05-03-2012, 02:05 PM
Those are really beautiful pages!
The only thing that i can think of to crit is the faces;
You tend to make them bulky and wide (even female), for example page 1 panel 3: her jaw is too big thus it makes her facial features look off. Most of the other faces have the same issue.
Everything else looks really cool to me! Cant' wait to see the finished pages.
05-03-2012, 09:08 PM
Willett - yessir! *Fingers crossed*
Fallenangel - thanks man! Will correct-- I think I like Cap with the bulky jaw, but definitely need to fix Black Widow's jaw.
Thanks guys! Appreciated!
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