WIP: Warrior Woman

[SLASHEh]

Heres the line work for my latest picture. I'm gonna try use the tips ive been getting to colour this one well.

http://www.conceptart.org/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=1429125&stc=1&d=1330123739

crits welcomed as always.

[Symson]

Don't crop her at the knees. It will seem like she's amputated. it's bad composition.

[MJames]

before you jump ahead to colors, take a few minutes to review
and make sure you're happy with the hands. they're ok but
could be better.

[Beastie]

Her head / face looks pretty small in comparison to the rest of her. Well, its might match her torso actually - but her arms are a bit thicker than that delicate and pretty face suggest they should be - and her thighs are 1.5 times the width of her head.

So - maybe its the arms and (definitely) legs that need thinning.

Just one opinion though. :)