Wolverine Rough

[Killustration Studio]

Umm, is his anatomy looking ok? His left arm needs some work, and his head might be a bit big. What else?

http://i1190.photobucket.com/albums/z453/Killustration_Studios/wolver.jpg

[Sedani]

Looking good, i think the mouth looks awesome, but the eyes aren't in the right place. And the shoulder looks a tad big, and maybe adjust the pelvis a bit. But the energy and expression is all there and the claws look awesome, i always have a hard time getting the claws to look sharp and angled correctly. Great start!!!! I wanna see the progress of it.

[jonas72]

I would tone down that right delt and beef up the right bicep but that may just be my preference. nice work so far.

[NickRocks]

if you dont mind...

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l48/NickGuy_2006/quickoverlay.png
1. bring down the back shoulder a bit

2 and 3. bring out the shoulder and bicep, to give the picture a more 3d feel and less profile-y

4 and 5. thicken up the arms so they have more power and weight to them...but watch out for that tangent i did by accident lol.

6. make the eye bigger and more expressive, it almost disappears as is.

hope this helps