View Full Version : Wolverine Rough
05-10-2011, 06:52 PM
Umm, is his anatomy looking ok? His left arm needs some work, and his head might be a bit big. What else?
05-10-2011, 07:46 PM
Looking good, i think the mouth looks awesome, but the eyes aren't in the right place. And the shoulder looks a tad big, and maybe adjust the pelvis a bit. But the energy and expression is all there and the claws look awesome, i always have a hard time getting the claws to look sharp and angled correctly. Great start!!!! I wanna see the progress of it.
05-12-2011, 12:04 AM
I would tone down that right delt and beef up the right bicep but that may just be my preference. nice work so far.
05-12-2011, 01:27 AM
if you dont mind...
1. bring down the back shoulder a bit
2 and 3. bring out the shoulder and bicep, to give the picture a more 3d feel and less profile-y
4 and 5. thicken up the arms so they have more power and weight to them...but watch out for that tangent i did by accident lol.
6. make the eye bigger and more expressive, it almost disappears as is.
hope this helps
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