Untitled Zombie Project

[kaldun]

My wife and I are working on this, hopefully the art makes up for the lack of narrative, lol. Im trying something a little different and drawing portrait size 17x11. Bring the crits. gulp!

http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/7251/32055513.jpg
By ibnkaldun (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/ibnkaldun) at 2010-12-03

http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/7318/87773828.jpg
By ibnkaldun (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/ibnkaldun) at 2010-12-03

http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/6345/83702142.jpg
By ibnkaldun (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/ibnkaldun) at 2010-12-03

http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/6938/39603804.jpg
By ibnkaldun (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/ibnkaldun) at 2010-12-03

[TomWoods]

Kinda cool drawing. It's not good to have so many straight on camera shots, you should study more interesting camera views in the movies and comics. Also backgrounds could use a bit more to them.

[kaldun]

Thanks, that what I needed to know. I had another person who inks check them out and he said the exact same thing. Did the last pages mix it up a bit (camera angle wise)?